just fluttering…another random act of poetry….

Once
upon a time
a girl who admired words
like paints
on a palette
enrolled
in a college poetry class
her words brushed the canvas
forming the landscape
filling the scene
but the professor said
no
wrong colors
wrong strokes
I thought this was my painting
so I took it back
and hid it
and quietly cried
over the B+
that tainted
my perfect G.P.A.
Father, help me not to break their little wings. Thank you for mending mine.
Sometimes it’s hard to listen to the same math facts being missed over and over. Sometimes it’s hard to coach a writing assignment to completion without sighs of frustration. As I teach my three, I need wisdom and patience to let them practice flying – even when they seem to be just fluttering about and going nowhere. Even fluttering about is beautiful in its own way.
UPDATE:
Don’t take my poem too seriously…a writing challenge just got me thinking about my one poetry class…which got me thinking about how much one person’s encouragement or discouragement can mean in our lives…which got me thinking about the ways I speak into the lives of my little ones…








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February 10, 2009 at 5:51 pm
Tiffers
which got me thinking about why I just love you so much
February 10, 2009 at 6:02 pm
L.L. Barkat
a good reminder to be a repairer and supporter of dreams, even as we guide those dreams
February 10, 2009 at 8:11 pm
Marcus Goodyear
Curse those evil poetry professors! Seriously, though, I’ve been there too. Sometimes I think the MFA system has done more damage to poetry than not.
On the other hand, it has ended up giving us great magazines like Poetry and 32 Poems.
February 11, 2009 at 10:04 am
Katrina
So true… what you’ve written here. This really has me thinking… it is such a good reminder to have patience and to be an encourager…
“As I teach my three, I need wisdom and patience to let them practice flying – even when they seem to be just fluttering about and going nowhere. Even fluttering about is beautiful in its own way.”
Thank you for this today.
February 12, 2009 at 10:07 pm
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